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Pro

This is great, good build up and animation and great punchline.
Short n Sweet

Thinning

Humour, to me, is still bland. The art is the same.
Im bored of these to be honest.

Great

Everything in this is grade A.
But to me when compared to Adam Philips, my honest opinion is it shouldnt be first of all time.

Originality

You copy someones animation style. You probably copy the way people dress and what they say - Why not try something original rather than follow a fad.

P.S Egoraptor can only do Humour, his talent is limited.

Great!

I think it's a great little short you made. The humour is fine, not that dark at all. This is playful humour on a tabboo subject but thats what makes it funny. The ending doesnt seem to really fit thought. good overall!

ClockworkPixel responds:

It's the womens time of the month ha . Thanks

Sellami?

Animated very well - nice soundtrack - climactic too. Overall 8/10 4/5

Why am i laughing so hard

This was brilliant. It's really good humour, it's a totally acceptable style too because of the anim content. Good Job, Merry Christmas

Could be better

Ways to improve:
1)Pace your start
2)Have a plot.
3)Character Development
4)Add lighting
5)Shape your characters
6)Research your characters
7)Spend time on your work
8)Aim to an audience
9) Rehearse your humour
10) Don't rely on popularity
11) Purple Monkey Dishwasher
12) See how spam can be annoying?
13) Shape your characters
14)Deatil your characters
15)Experiment with colour schemes
16)Follow the Equilibrium - Distruption - Solution technique
17)Don't dwell
18)Keep It real
19)Actually try
20)Inside jokes go nowhere.

Heres my constuctive critism... If you aim was to upload and waste bandwidth then you actually could have done alot better. Your sound quality could have been better to eat up more memory. It seems to be that you are using your status on NG to attract attention. This is clearly only and observation. As stated, bring it down to the roots - Don't rely on that.

I hope you read this and take into account my views and contructive critque.

118 247

118 247 - Yeah you reused this.

Oh yeah

Italy Rules

The Orginal "Enzer0" Many people have stole my name - Do not be fooled. A collection of my Media through the years.

Enzo Satera @Enzer0

Age 35, Male

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Graduate UWS

Glasgow

Joined on 3/4/04

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